REVIEW TO AN UNNAMED BOOK

The book came to me digitally, without tittle but with author name, whom I know for years but just as a pinned friend.


The plot of the story is one of the college of Delhi University. The main TWO characters meet due to a common friend, in course of college election campaign. They get into friendship and further love. But the boys doesn't want to indulge in such things, some for his carrier and a few for epic sense towards girl.

So he unilaterally broke up. But broke up is not that easy because of the common institution and also many common friend by then. With many down and ups story takes a significant turn, when the boy came to not that his girlfriend already has a boy friend.

So story is very plain, halve engaging. Starts is some how moron, and first chapter brings with fresh blow.

Writer has given only the first person account, of his own only. So it seems more than DAIRY ENTRY and less than NOVEL. It includes all possible moment when the girl matter, and whenever it loses girl from the sequence it loses worth.

Whatsapp conversation and its recreation by writer is often interesting but the long prose in between  are feeble.

Writer has tried to sum up with the happy end but story seems uncompleted.

This story is about any couple in the college who went through breakup. Nothing more than that. One would hardly get any learning or new experience after reading it unless he/she already has a breakup.


WHAT is me as A READER & MY SUGGESTIONS -

I'm a keen reader of politics, science, environment, society, economy etc. LOVE story, a big no. But I have read several and on the top of it is GUNOHON ka Dewta. I've not read all the book by CheBHAG, any one can call me A CHETAN BHAGAT READER.

I think the author should include the second and the third person conversation. Like conversation b/n MOM and DAD, all though I feel it is preforced in the story. But conversation of two friends and between a friend and her, or between her BF and her must be included.

On the other hand I think you should not consider the above SUGG, bcz it would need to go through drastic change.

I read it in the TWO GO. I often do the same in case of love story, not knowingly but it happens. Half part of the story was very much engaging but after that it loses the tightness.

If you use such long prose, it should not be multiple time. It should be ONE or just TWO. Otherwise small prose can attract reader(like me).